I have written paper for five forces , I had feedback from professor , my paper needs editing and writing one paragraph
I have uploaded all documents
it should be delivered within 24 hours !!!
these professor feedback >>>>>>>>;
“Although you provide some solid information, the paper will need to be proofread prior to submitting the revision. I do not have time to copy edit your paper, but I urge you to take advantage of the excellent resources we have on campus to help you improve your writing. As it stands now, it is very difficult to discern your argument.
Also, it seems that you may have not read the assignment’s directions as you discuss all 5 of the forces and fail to answer the questions posed there.”