Please re-write the essay-it needs to be as long as it right now (6-7 pages)
Be concise on what you are saying, make the connections.
make it really easy for the reader to understand.
FOLLOW WHAT THE PROFESSOR IS SAYING-
WRITE A CLEAR THESIS!
YOU NEED TO DO THE READINGS!!- if not you will be lost- I have the notes of the class that I am more than willing to share, to make it easier for you to understant